I LOVE! The build-up is spectacular!! =D I really wish it were a little longer, I would've loved to hear more.... :( As Killingyoutwice stated, I could easily hear this being in a movie! :)
I LOVE! The build-up is spectacular!! =D I really wish it were a little longer, I would've loved to hear more.... :( As Killingyoutwice stated, I could easily hear this being in a movie! :)
I'm so glad you like it! :D I'm really considering taking this and putting a lot of work into it, maybe expanding the whole thing. I like how simple it is now, but I think it could be awesome as a part of a larger piece. Thanks for the review! :)
Great job! LOVE THE DRUMS!
It's fun to listen to and it keeps you interested with a steady progression/ build-up. I like the melody through most of it but there's something about 3:02 - 3:31 that just sounds a little strange to me. The pitch of the melody doesn't seem to match up with the supporting parts. (Maybe, it's just me :( Other than that, I really like it! Keep it up!
5/5
9/10
I personally never had a problem with that part, but now that you say it, it's true that the violin is kind of a little sharp. I will see if I can do better for that part. ^^
I've asked someone of my family and he also said that this part is a little strange, so, I'm definitively changing that.
Thank you very much for your review! ^^
Short but it sounds nice :)
Thank youuuu
The main reason I'm giving this song a five is because I'm wearing headphones and the sound is jumping back and forth between my ears :{ I listened to it the second time without headphones, much better but the song still never progresses anywhere. I think it'll be better once it's finished. Keep working on it :)
I like songs that actually uses stereo effect to the fullest instead of mostly just mono and some tiny effects in one side or the other
The change ups at 1:15. It's not bad, a tad repeatitve after 2:40 though. To be honest, the guitar sound started to get a little annoying. I think you should've used a softer instrument there.
I didn't want to say it in the description, as I thought it would influence the experience, but you're absolutely right, that guitar gets totally obnoxious pretty quickly. Maybe I should just end it right before the guitar kicks in. Thanks for the honesty!
Nice job! :) one thing, in the water level, some of the notes that are held out get a tad annoying at times. Other than that, I liked it. This has given me the want to make my super mario song.
4/5
Yea when i was making the song i noticed that and i couldnt fix it sorry. Thanks for the Feedback
I like. It feels like this would fit right in with the music off of the Tony Hawk skating games :p I added this to my favorites.
Thanks! That was pretty much what I was going for with this one, glad you think I pulled it off! Thanks a lot for the review!
Like N-Form stated, This is a very unique sounding song which is why I gave a nine. I think the part at :58 - 1:28 should've had something there to help with the build up but it doesn't sould horrible the way it is now. Just keep up with what you're doing because it's not bad :)
4/5
9/10
Thanks for the constructive criticism. I wanted the part at 0:58 to be calm in order to contrast with the craziness of the rest of the song. But I can see how it falls kinda flat; it could totally be too boring while failing to build enough at the same time. I'll keep that in mind for next time, thanks.
I like...
In more ways than one, it comes off as a video game piece in my opinion, I enjoyed listening to this. It's different but really fun to listen to, great job :D
5/5
10/10
Thank you, thank you so.. So much. It means alot that you enjoy it, I worked extra hard to perfect it. Thank you c:
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