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It definitely sounds like something you'd hear playing a video game. It's not bad. Keep it up ^^

SiXWiNGS responds:

So like over a year later I notice I have reviews! O_o
Thanks!! I haven't really recorded much more, but I plan on starting back up again.

I really enjoyed the beginning and the build-up to the first drum break. It's very smooth and it transitions nicely. To me, everything was put together quite nicely!

4/5
9/10

ShiftingConix responds:

Thank you very much! It's very much appreciated :)

In my opinion, it took just a tad too long to 'get going'. Also, the vocals could be a tad louder, it's hard to understand what's being said but that could also be a result of the auto-tone used.

I do like the breaks in between the vocals, it adds a nice touch. Overall, it could use some work but it's not horrible.

The guitar, it sounds slightly distorted and makes the entire track a little edgy. I don't know if you intended to make it that way but it's distracting. I liked the supporting cello sounds though. I feel if you could just fix the guitar it'd give it a much more ambient feel : )

Tristanus responds:

Thanks for your review : )

I wanted the guitar to sound a bit distorted, as you said. It probably comes from my interest for post-hardcore and post-rock soundings. I won't register this one again, but i'll keep your point in mind for my next ones.
I'm glad you liked the cello sound. I'ts not easy to make it sound "natural", because of the amp settings.

The only reason I'm voting 6 is because this is the exact drum cadence ParagonX9 used for Zero Gravity. (Except, in a slightly higher pitch) I was expecting to hear something a little more original. In all, I think if you used an original drum beat and made it longer, it would be great.

It's very pretty :D (I hear a wonderful start to a beautiful song!)
There seems to be an echo stemming from the main piano melody. (It may just be because I'm listening to it through headphones)
It could be a little longer, although I'll be lenient since this is your first song, right?

Great job!

I love the build-up especially at 1:00. The climax reminds me of something along the lines of the movie, "Signs". It's nice, I just wish the entire piece was a little longer. I think this could've been turned into something grand!

5/5
9/10

I'm sorry but I couldn't help but sing the Spiderman theme song while listening :P It's a nice tune but that's all I can think about : )

It's not bad for your first loop : ) It's very catchy and nicely arranged. The only problem is it doesn't sound like it's been mastered at all. Look into it, other than that, GREAT JOB!

8/10

It takes just a tad too long to get started : ( Some of the sounds used are really weird. I'm guessing that's what you were going for?

SammyFox responds:

I never get my songs to sound the way I'd like them to sound so I just go with what I think sounds closest.

but personally I like using those weird-sounding instruments <3

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Moanalua High School

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